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A Short Love Story – The Lonely Girl and Her New World of Love

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Short love stories are all about that skip in the heart, but could you actually have been in a romantic love story all along, and not know it? Rick Hawney reminisces about his walk into the world of love with a girl who didn’t even want to know him.

I’ve heard a saying, that “life is a surprise.” Call me a sceptic, but I generally scoff at lines that scream something that leaves us expecting so much. My short love story may be short on words, but it’s a story that’s filled every thought and day of my existence with happiness.

I’m a guy, a 26 year old guy who works in a job he likes. A guy who hangs out with his friends when the sun goes down, and one who, when the story begins, is still single.

I’m single, not because I want to be single. I think it’s weird to be single. Or maybe that’s what all guys think.

I’m just a guy who’s been looking high and low for that girl who can make things happen inside me.

You know, your heart stops beating just for a second, your throat goes dry, you get gooseflesh, feel a bit dizzy, and the works.

I haven’t experienced that. Most of my friends haven’t experienced that too, but they’re all going out with someone anyway! [Read: How to spot the physical signs of love and say goodbye to guessing games]

The short love story of my life and how it all begins

The story of me falling madly in love didn’t actually go as I had expected. My throat never got dry, ever. But then, I liked a girl. Of course, it wasn’t ‘love.’

Actually speaking, it wasn’t even ‘like’. As a matter of fact, I have no idea what I felt. I spend my evenings at a café, next to a huge television display, and whether I like it or not, I end up spending my time staring at it. And it bloody hell, annoys me! Can’t they just junk it?

Well, and just like me, there was this cute girl who would come to the same café, and stare at the same display every day. Well, sometimes she read a book.

Or sometimes, she used to light a cigarette and look at her fumes take shape, and then disappear into non-existence *this was back when smoking was still injurious to health, but everyone was perfectly okay with indoor smoking!*. She was fascinating and pretty. But there was one difference between us. I came to the cafe with a couple of friends. She came alone. I don’t usually see girls do that. That’s weird, right?

Love stories and stolen glances

We used to glance across each other now and then, but there was nothing more. No jolt.  No sweat. No knots in my stomach.

The days turned to weeks, and weeks turned into a couple of months. That’s a long time once you picture the scene outside the world of literature. Long, long ago seems so cute in a book, but an hour in a suffocating conference hall? Murder! Without actually knowing it, I was attracted to this girl. I actually admired her, and her calm, comfortable, cool as a cat persona that she brought along for company every day. Could it be love?

And then, I began the occasional staring game. I stared at her now and then, discreetly, but in a way she knew I was glancing at her. But no deal. She just wasn’t bothered. Ouch! My ego was crushed. [Read: Subtle but powerful eye contact flirting moves that work like a charm]

A rainy evening – The perfect setting for my love story

One evening, it rained cats and dogs, and a few frogs and fishes too. I was in the café, she walked in with an umbrella. The place was packed, and there was one seat that was empty. That was facing my table. I had half a mind to get up and call her over, but before I could make up my mind and inflate my courage, she walked to a corner table that just got cleared.

An hour later, it was still raining. In the midst of all that rain and thunder, I contemplated and coined her name, “The Lonely Girl”. The Lonely Girl had walked out a few minutes before I decided to leave. When I got outside the café, I saw her standing by the sidewalk, waiting. I walked up to her quickly, and before I knew it, I had asked her if I could drop her to her place. As it was raining, I added *again, all of this sounds ancient, but Uber didn’t exist back then, gasp!*

She didn’t smile, she just looked at me, turned around and walked away in the rain! Under her umbrella. [Read: How to be a gentleman and win a girl over with your charm]

My friends laughed at me. Yep, it was completely embarrassing. Even the bum on the street held back a grin. I hadn’t even heard the Lonely Girl’s voice. Pathetic, I say. The next day I saw her at the café, she was sitting by herself. Perhaps she was Calvin, and she had a Hobbes around to keep her company. I was invisible. Her own smoke rings were fascinating her. This happened everyday for a month.

Night out clubbing – The second chance in my love story

On another great day, I was out at a club. And wonders of wonders! She was there, with a few girl pals. Perhaps it was fate. I looked at her, she saw me and then she looked away. I passed through the crowd of dancing drunks and walked right towards her. I walked up and wanted to speak to her.

She saw me and flashed a big grin. I was shocked. I was numb. I didn’t know her mouth could move that way! And before I could think of anything, she grasped her friend’s hand and walked away to the ladies room! And I didn’t see her again that night. But I couldn’t stop thinking about her for hours after that. Perhaps even days. Because she didn’t show up at the café the next day, and many days after that. That was shocking. I started wondering if she had changed her hideout because I was stalking her. [Read: How to talk to a girl for the first time – 16 tips to win her over]

Romantic persuasions

Two whole weeks later, I walked into the café and there she was, all radiant and bright. Gosh, I had missed her! I sat down at a table a few tables away from her. I knew I wanted to talk to her. And thank God, the café was quite empty. It was a bit too early for the horde of coffee addicts to make their entrance.

I waited until her coffee arrived. And then, I waited for her check. When her check was on the table, I walked up to her. My throat was lumpy and tight. Each step I took only made my walk to her feel further away. But I walked on. The café was empty. No harm. I could always change my hangout if she slaps me. What was I thinking, dammit!

“Hey, you can’t run away from me today. You’ve got to get your check”, I quirked.

“What?” she exclaimed before she realized she actually replied.

“I said you can’t just avoid me like this, you know…”

“What are you talking about?”

“Can I sit down with you?”

“No, you can’t.”

“Oww… c’mon, just for a minute, okay?”


She took out her wallet, and wanted to dart. I couldn’t help getting mesmerized by her voice, but there were more pressing things at hand. I had to talk to her.

To cut a long jittery conversation short, I convinced her to talk to me for a few minutes. And that’s when everything started breezing through. We started talking, and the minutes stretched on at a really fast pace. I got to know so much about her, and I also got to know that she had a great sense of humor. We had a great time talking to each other, and soon, she said she had to go, as it was getting late for her. [Read: 13 signs of unspoken attraction that’ll reveal if someone’s into you]

We exchanged numbers and I asked her if we could “bump in” again tomorrow. She just smiled and walked away. Sigh! It was bliss. As I stared at her walk away, my eyes were distracted by an alphabet bracelet she had forgotten behind.  It said “life is a surprise”. Wow! Maybe that was true. I slipped the bracelet into my pocket.

Feeling the love at night

I lay awake that night and I stared at her number on my cell phone. I wanted to call her, but settled for a text. The very minute I texted her, I got a call from her. She too was contemplating over whether or not to text me. Sweet!

We spoke and spoke until the wee hours of the morning, and I just wanted to see her again that evening. We met again at the café and it felt so good. She was smiling the whole time and we were actually flirting back and forth. I asked her out to dinner.

All of a sudden, she looked offended. She declined. And then, there was silence. That calm, deadly silence that makes you feel worse than getting yelled at. I asked her what was wrong, but she didn’t mention it, and our “date” was cut short that evening. I got home and looked at her bracelet. “Life is a surprise”. Simple words can be a confusing affair at times.

Rekindling my love story

That night, I called her again and we spoke. At first she was distant, but she seemed fine after a while, and then I asked her why she got so offended in the café. She didn’t tell at first, but as the hours went by, she told me that she hated guys and the worst thing she ever wanted to do was go out on a date with a guy.

Apparently, she had been hurt one too many times by guys whom she trusted with all her heart. We spoke until five in the morning, and she told me a lot more. I just wanted to hug her, but the thought of mentioning that scared me. But we decided to meet again. Same bat place, same bat time.

We started hanging out together all the time after that. At times, I picked her up from her workplace, and at other times, I dropped her back home. Soon, weeks turned into months, and this time, everything felt just like a fairytale.

Time stood still when it was just the two of us. One evening, when we met up and went to the café, it was too crowded for space, so we decided to go for a drive to while away the time. It was a long drive, and somewhere along the way, the sun was shining mildly at us, it was a huge red ball that made the whole world around me glow. It was the most romantic sight, or maybe I had never noticed the sun at that time of the day. Nevertheless, it was beautiful.

She said the sun was beautiful. I said it couldn’t be compared to her. She smiled. I smiled. I clasped her hand. It felt tense. And then, we locked eyes. Thank God, the road was deserted. And then, her lips split into a girlish grin that I still can’t forget. That was the moment. It was indeed beautiful. I felt warm and fuzzy. And I wanted the drive to last forever. We got to her place, and I hugged her goodbye. That was the first time I ever hugged her. As we hugged, I knew she didn’t want to let go. Neither did I.

A short love story that lasts a lifetime

The next evening, we went to the café. We sat next to each other for the first time. And we held hands. We spoke less, and smiled more. I told her that I liked her. She smiled a lot more. And then, she punched me in the arm, and said that she liked me too. And just then, I slipped her bracelet out from my pocket. “Life is a surprise”. I couldn’t agree with that more. I smiled. She saw her bracelet. And she laughed. That tinkling, sweet laugh that is so intoxicating. I was a happy boy with the perfect present, all over again. And she was a happy, lonely girl. Just lonely no more.

One can never tell how love can come into your life, or how you can experience your own short love stories out of the blue. But a great love story awaits all of us, and it’s just around the corner. After all, didn’t someone once say that life is a surprise!

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20 thoughts on “A Short Love Story – The Lonely Girl and Her New World of Love”

  1. lanle lunza says:

    love this site….

  2. rashi says:

    simple and beautiful…. full of suprises as well………..
    really liked it……:)

  3. darksecrets says:

    I don’t know how to explain how I feel right now. I guess it left me feeling warm and fuzzy too. 🙂

  4. Kim says:

    Love this site lovely story support !

  5. Narma says:

    Good story….Beautifully potrayed in your words…But then, one question i have in my mind. Are you people still loving each other? Have you both got married to each other?

  6. whiteArrow says:

    nice … and i love it ..

  7. Ridhi says:

    I always think that ” I can never be in love or no boy ever love me ” but time proves me wrong. Last year on 10th feb i got a friendship with a guy. We two are classmates. Since that time to starting of august we chatted daily. And he always tries to make me happy, fine. He cares for me alot, no one can cares like him for me. I am a very soft hearted person, he teaches me how to leave happily, he took a promise from me don’t to cry ever in your life.
    Due to some circumstances we lost our contact.
    But he tells me whenever i need him he is their for me.
    He never tells me directly that he loves me but gives many hints which i understand after we are not in contact. It’s hard to describe his qualities in words. I can see his love for me in his eyes.
    And i want to say you yes I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. You are my first love and i can’t love someone else as i did you.
    But we will never be together and has this hidden love in the hearts of both us…:'(

  8. Lynda says:

    This is really nice n sweet story i enjoy reading 🙂

  9. butterfly says:

    I’m 26 years old girl and have a girlfriend.. Its unacceptable for most people and many have wished our love gets crushed.. Is love aware of gender, is the emotion different if shared by same sex partners.. Why is it a taboo.. We share & care and love just like any opposite sex couple.. We are not allowed to meet and there’s pain in it but its worth the happiness and the satisfaction when we talk on phone.. Will we stand the test of time and closed ones.. Will people understand that its the emotion that’s important..

  10. Leon says:

    Congrats. Nice determination.

  11. feeling lonely says:

    Cute story. Feeling lonely after reading that but can’t wait till I find love. Wonder how my love story will turn out… Still waiting…

  12. Marzia says:

    a classic slow and fresh start of relationship unlike todays fast forward ‘get it done’ type.

  13. James says:

    *sigh.* where is my lonely girl hiding..

  14. parwez says:

    Really,nice love story..

  15. parwez says:

    When i was in class 7th ,my senior friend told me,”oh parwez!can you convey this letter to your sister then i used to think ,what is the relationship between my sister and my senior friend named (Rayhan).Because they loved each other too much and they both got married.But ,at the end of class 7th,my board exam held in college ,means out side my school,when i appeared in examination ,i saw a beautiful girl.apparently she was little more age to me,i started to peep her time to time when she was in her mood;as soon she turned her eyes upon me ,i turned my head.As a same process carried away since two days of exams,on 3rd day;during examination time,she thrown her pen and unfortunately her pen stopped to roll in front of my legs,i understood better time to help her and i picked up her pen ,gave her.For a short while she smiled,after exams,i asked her name then she replied,”is it necessary to ask me my name for you”.can you be not done any without my name.I didn’t say anything ,afterward she smiled and said “,Agustin Row”,.Since that time ,i and Agustin began to talk more and more,And finally our little friendship converted into true love.Today,i can’t wake up without calling her ,Sometimes,i think if she doesn’t live then i am worthless without her,…..

  16. beatz says:

    I just hope o have the encouragement likes u..i’ve been crank up every time i face to face with her TT?TT

  17. ChariBright says:

    Such a lovely story. For a moment I had to live in it

  18. magi says:

    as an African, i reaally need to feel what love is though i dont have a girl but how can i get one of my age?

  19. june says:

    *sigh* where is my such amazing boy hiding

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